Literature thread?

[SouOfTheRequiem]

Since I remembered that Angelcats wanted to write a novel/short story, i thought I'd make a thread here for people to summit their little short stories and the such. Feel free to delete this thread if you deem this as not necessary.

[Johnny-Jon]

Not necessary? Never... Tis the Rant thread after all! Look forward to reading things!

[angelcat]

Wow, Sou-sama.. you remembered that? i was actually gonna drop the idea of writing that novel because of my studies.. but i guess I'll reconsider.. xD maybe some day i'll rewrite that draft and post it here. ~bump.

[Johnny-Jon]

OFMG Haruhi. O.O

[vin-nii]

The four parts of a story: Intro, Problem, Climax, Conclusion (and Secret...given you get the reference)

Intro: This is Vin-nii
Problem: Vin-nii is hungry
Climax: Vin-nii braved the unknown (aka Kitchen) and baked himself a pie
Conclusion: Vin-nii ate the pie and was satisfied

Spoiler:

see? easy stuff

[angelcat]

Yeah, haruhi.. i just love her hair johnny-sama x3

Vin-nii-sama.. hehe.. good one.. xDD

guys, i've downloaded mirc.. finally but it's weird, i dunno why everything's blank and how to use it..

[SouOfTheRequiem]

wow Vin-nii thats quite the SHORT story

[Johnny-Jon]

Vinni's short story was based on real events. Please. Do not try this at home.

[vin-nii]

if it was a true story

Ultimate Secret: Vin-Nii was reborn on the third day... as a zombie vampire undead thingy

[Johnny-Jon]

Here's something I wrote back in 2009 when I had this really vivid dream about the sky.

The day was warm as there were few clouds in sight.
The sky was sapphire blue and the sun was golden.
There was a pleasant breeze that would rustle the leaves of the trees nearby.
The birds would chirp as the breeze cooled them from the warmth of the sun.
But Time, it seems, moves at it's own pace as,
The day came to an end.
The Sun’s fading light was illuminating the dark blue skies.
Streaks of orange could be seen, painting themselves on top of the calm ocean and the remainders of the white clouds above.
A shadow of a lone willow was casting itself away, like a soul, wanting to separate from its’ motionless body.
The last of the orange glow could be seen.
The Sun slowly merging with the horizon before the first of the many stars to come,
Shone like gemstones embedded in the deep blue sky.

[angelcat]

That's so beautiful Johnny-sama..

[Johnny-Jon]

Thanks ^^ ~ I might write more stuff myself in the future~ so I look forward to yours.

Plus, you really don't need to call me sama xP I'm most likely younger than you anyway~

[angelcat]

Ok, i'll call you Johnny-kun then.

i might have something up my sleeve myself..
anyways, i could share this one..
i wrote this in 2008.. for someone..

entitled it "I LOVE YOU." It made sense though.

I Love you
But the words couldn't come out.
In the days I am blue
"I Love You," I wanted to shout.

Yet still as days passed
"I Love You," I never said so.
And still as you come close I must
Move away and just say no.

Why must I hide
But not want it?
I never abide
By these nor quit.

My image has slowly broken
And my reputation weakened.
I run from it but right then
These quandaries never end.

I open my mind and wonder
How everything got to a blunder.
I'm loosing control
And loosing it all.

I Love you
But my heart is broken.
I Love you
And my tears have fallen.


~it was so silly of me to share it on friendster..
ahh, when i think about it..
the guy i had a crush on back then must've really thought i was overdoing it. (secret was.. i was.)


Ahh, i just remembered Sou-sama also didn't want me to call him that.. hmm.. Then i shall also call you Sou-kun.. or just Sou?

[Johnny-Jon]

Aweh! that's good! but It's a shame it contains sad memories for you~

[angelcat]

Aweh! that's good! but It's a shame it contains sad memories for you~

nah.. not really sad..
it's just.. he's the type of guy who's smart, cute, got guts, kind, but stubborn.. and he has quite a nerve.. he's so arrogant.. x3 but i used to like that arrogance of his.. y'know, he only boasts off what he really has and not what he doesn't.. so i can't find fault in that. it's weird though, how i still like him. I even keep myself updated with him.. so that i know he doesn't have a girlfriend yet :p

When i heard he was gonna study at a La Salle College, I also took an exam in another La Salle school just so that we're both Lasallians <even though it's another school, another branch to be exact> ..i think i definitely overdid it too that time.. but at least we're separated now. It's not like i really don't hope to see him again. I just wanna get over it. x3 a tough feeling love is for girls.. y'know what they say, johnny-kun.. "to a guy, love's just one chapter.. but to a girl, it's the whole book.." or so they say.. haha

[SouOfTheRequiem]

Heres what I've been doing other then work and editing?

Title: Give A Girl A Voice

Setting: Alternative Universe of Present Day Earth

Summary so far:
North and South Koreans have gone to war leading to the next World War. United States has taken the South Korean stance along with her allies. The exception China, who is supporting the North Koreans under the condition of not using nuclear bombs. Japan and Taiwan does not escape China's sight and are invaded. An alliance of Japan, Taiwan, Australia, New Zeland naval forces attempted to hold the Chinese navy. In a remote village in Japan nearby the frontline, there a 18 year old girl bidding her love farewell as he is drafted into the defense force. Although she isn't one of the people taking up arms and fighting for her country, she does her part by singing songs to calm the refugees, for her love and hopes for peace

[angelcat]

aww.. how nice Sou-sama..
I think it has a bit of dark and dramatic parts..
nice plot. hehe..
and maybe a war drama of some sort..
pretty cool.. it's seems interesting..
ahh.. hope you make progress with that..
maybe this is like a pre-"new world era" or something..
it just sounds sad.. hmm.. not asking you to give off the ending.. but i wanna know, will the girl die?
reminds me of florence nightingale.

[SouOfTheRequiem]

well I did plan for this to be dark but yet dramatic through the times of war. The hell the soldier goes through, the torment of the one waiting at home and the insecurity of having one's country being invaded with what seems like an overwhelming force. Through all the despair a faint but strong flicker of hope emerges though a girl's voice. May sound cliche which I do hope to avoid as it progresses

[angelcat]

mix in some comedy then
hope it goes well Sou-sama..

can i ask some opinion on this poem i wrote last year, jan. 02,2010, entitled the night:

The night was cold as ice.
I gazed upon the starry skies.
A mem'ry flashed upon my sight.
I felt like I have taken flight.

The dream I had in a blue moon:
I heard the birds sing in a tune
And watched them fly
Into the golden sunset in the sky.

And so I gazed upon them high
They soared so lovely in the sky.
And as the sunset came upon,
I realized the day was done.

And so I stood on grassy fields
And watched the golden sun
Disappear before the mountain peek.
I woke up in stun.

>it's kind of a confusing, contradicting kind of poem.. what do u think? LOL

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