Yo guys!

Just wanna say
Hi again to everyone..
and..
i am feeling all shy again..
since i have been
"inactive"
for quite a long time..
i hope im still welcome?

You see,
i have been
out and about..
thinking..

of writing a novel..
*sigh*
long after i finish nursing, i guess!
i randomly chose this course..
out of dozens of others, including other pre-meds..
but i wanted to write.. LOL
so how about it? mind hearing a plot?

I've also been reading the latest of Naruto Shippuuden and believe it is wonderful! Sooo exciting! Sai's brother is resurrected! yay! arrg.. im so tense!

More power to Nayuki Love!
Gambare Gambare!

I'm a fan of tragic love stories I suppose...

The hero, who lost all his memories except for his first love, goes on a journey to find her (his current girlfriend hides her identity and go with him as a friend) but as he travels the memories with his current GF resurfaces... leading to some good ol angst

can put in a twist where the first love was actually an 18 yrs old girl he met when he was in the 6th grade (making it a one-sided crush I suppose), who now has a family of her own.

The current GF was originally a tsundere... twin tails optional

My ultimate fantasy novel is born?!

let vineh drown in his delusions...

vin-nii wrote:I'm a fan of tragic love stories I suppose...



My ultimate fantasy novel is born?!

Vampire Knight wins

not quite, excel-chan. Shoujo may have tragic love but the middle bits can be seriously boring

Whats your suggestion then >.>

Air? Sola?

btw cat you can apply whenever you want...your call

Air is bittersweet and I forgot how Sola ended

uhm.. can i apply for proofreader now? xD

ahh, by the way.. the plot of the novel i was thinking of writing is about two detectives of the 27th century (maybe year 2635?).. at a time when people didn't believe in the existence of supernaturals such as espers, vampires, and animagus(which, in my novel, exists!).. these two detectives.. male and female, age 18 and 19.. are undercover agents working for different agencies.. first i shall create chapters wherein they work separately.. to discuss their identities and roles in life.. and then the next chapters.. it will be a merged investigation by the two agencies.. wherein they hire their best agents in solving this case.. i want to put in some twists before letting them end up falling for each other.. the main plot is about "acknowledging" the existence of these supernaturals in the 27th century..

Vin-nii-sama.. you are a fan of love stories?! that's great! so, how can this novel of mine get more interesting? xDD

and thanks PimpToad-sama for telling me that :DD
i am looking forward to it..
although i am still so sorry for wasting your time applying as a translator when i wasn't proficient enough..

I suppose things like ef-memories and melodies. Air is my kinda thing too but Sola didn't really build tension for me

EF is too sad =(, i just deleted them off my hard drive yesterday i don't have the heart to watch it again > <

Sola was alright, sad ending though toad
um i suppose you could post your novel here? Get some feedback assuming no one is gonna be lazy on that.

My rule of thumb is to make the two detectives brother and sisters and the sister is a tsundere....jk

so are they gonna have a rivalry relationship?

first things first, how do i formally apply for proofreader?
i remembered i mentioned it on my last last post.. only, not clearly.. hehehe..

ahh, Sou-sama, it would be too long if i post the novel here itself. But i could write chapter summaries. hehehe..

Vin-nii-sama, i didn't have a tsundere character in mind..
but i was planning that the girl detective had an elder sister who was somehow that kind of character. but i did intend for both of these detectives to be very serious with their work.. and somehow create a rival between their partnership in the "main" mission. Although, i'll make the guy’s character change through the chapters.. making him show his true (happy-go-lucky) self <after revealing some family factors that created his character> and then develop some special feelings toward the person who helped him get hold of his life, the girl detective. Uhmm, although the girl is a serious character, she is still free-spirited.. goes out with friends, has a past-time.. and such..(which she denies, like having a secret identity) but the guy is different.

On the otherhand.. i find it rather difficult getting to how will i, exactly, introduce the "special" characters with abilities and stuff.. hehehe

Not quite sure what you mean by the last line, but if you're saying how to introduce the supernatural the mainstream way is to the police finding werid corpse (eg. for werewolf it would be massive bite and scratch marks) or a prolouge showing the victim getting attacked by the mysterious creature

Oh yeah! Right.. why didn't i think of that Vin-nii-sama..
i was thinking of how i could make them appear in police reports when the police do not even believe they exist.. and i guess, i overlooked that idea.. xD
although, i was thinking.. "how will they meet?" ..in a scene of crime(straight away), or at school(do think the idea that the agents are in high school should go or stay?), or at some party.. or mall.. or as a double-agent..
and while thinking.. ahh, now i know i can get each "supernatural" character to be in those different situations.. hmm.. my imagination is getting blurry..
how about a vampire seducting the male protagonist? xD in which situation, the female protagonist can just kick her ass(and the vampire's identity) away.. hahaha..
in my story, vampires have a hypnosis power.. so that their victims won't recall what happened to them.. leaving no proof of vampire attack but a wound.

FIY.. i am at school.. subject "Nutrition and Diet Therapy" ~2hour break! yahoo.. xD